Authors Note: This is a practice introduction to show descriptive
detail. I also tried to use personification, and I tried to be really
descriptive and show emotion in the piece.
The lightning cackles above me. The drops of rain run off the
leaves and splat in the mud. It’s so loud I don’t know if I hear him or
not. “CRACK” the branches scream at me. I hear a scream and snap my neck
around. There, through the trees I can see his silhouette. His gaze burns my
pupils. He falls to his knees and starts to twitch. I frown as my feet start
taking steps. I look down my feet are just walking, I turn and grab a nearby
tree. My fingers one by one peel off the dripping branches. I have lost control
of my body. I fight my body but I know it's useless. Now only feet from
him he stands slowly and looks me straight in the eye.
He doesn't have to say anything I know what’s in store for me.
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